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Writing Better- Lessons from Tennis

By Patsi Krakoff in Writing Great Blog Content, Writing Great Copy

Nadal Yesterday I was a few minutes late to our Mentor class call. My trusty partner Denise asked what happened. My only excuse was watching Rafael Nadal play tennis on TV over at the Pacific Life Open in Indian Wells. A poor excuse, I admit, but look at it this way: you can learn a lot about writing for your blog, articles, and white papers from the game of tennis.

  1. Keep your eye on the ball. "See" the lines, the net and your opponent, but always keep your eye focused on the ball. When writing you must "see" your outline, your stories, and your structure, but keep your focus on the purpose of your writing project.
  2. Serve with force into the server box. If your serve is superior in speed, power, and accuracy, you won’t have to worry about your ground strokes. The same goes for writing a strong headline. If you craft a powerful compelling headline, you don’t have to struggle so much with the content.
  3. Hit the ball to where they are not. If the opponent comes to net, lob the ball high and deep. Or, make them run from side to side. Same with content: keep them guessing, use variety, and give them information or a perspective they don’t already have.
  4. In tennis, he who hits the ball within the lines last wins the point. That’s it. It doesn’t have to be pretty. You just have to outlast the opponent. In copywriting, it is often he who gets the most clicks or responses from the reader. That’s it, results count. Your writing doesn’t have to be pretty, just effective. Persist.
  5. Follow through with your strokes. Forehand or backhand, that usually means from low to high. In writing for the web, you also need to follow up with people who respond. In blogs, thank them for participating in the conversation. For sales copy, make sure your autoresponder confirmation is personable and clear about next steps. Follow through with subsequent messages to ask for feedback.

I could go on and on, but I’d like you to have a try at this fun game. How is writing like…[your favorite sport]?

Headline Makeovers with Wizard Clark

By Patsi Krakoff in Writing Great Copy

More headline wizardry from Copyblogger Brian Clark. If you’re like me, you learn a lot when people explain the options and decisions. I picked up a couple of tips on writing stronger headlines by using more powerful words.

1. The Secret Selling Power of Color
Original Headline: Colors for Marketing

Reasoning: In this case, the original headline communicated what the post was about, but I thought it could use a bit of jazzing up. I went with the old stand-by “The Secret of…” format since this information is not generally well known, and employed more vivid wording. While you want to avoid hyperbole, understatement is often not the most effective approach.

Lessons I learned: Think jazzy, vivid wording, avoid hype yet do not understate.

2. Discover New Music That’s Perfect for You
Original Headline: Discovering Music That You Like

Reasoning: It’s hard to go wrong when you start a headline with the word “discover,” but discovering is a bit too unassertive here. Also, while “new” is implied, the headline gains a bit of momentum by its express inclusion. Finally, music that you “like” seems less than earth shattering. Speaking to the individual tastes and preferences of the reader in a general sense seems to be the best approach given that we don’t know what those tastes and preferences are.

Lessons I learned: avoid non-assertive words, go for earth shattering.

If you missed lesson one, go here and to Brian’s original post here.

Info Products Rule: Listen Up!

By Patsi Krakoff in Online Marketing, Teleclasses & Seminars

Blogging and Beyond: Episode 10
"Promoting Your Business with Information Products"
with guest expert
Paulette Ensign of Tips Booklets International.


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There are dozens of ways to create info products quickly and without a lot of expense.  Check out Paulette’s programs and her blog at www.booklettips.com. She’s the Queen!

Info Products: Why People Fail

By Patsi Krakoff in Online Marketing, Teleclasses & Seminars, Writing Great Copy

I got an email this morning from marketer Bob Serling. He says that a survey of people who have taken info product development courses reveals a surprising fact on why people fail.

I would have guessed inadequate marketing, a badly put together product, inability to set up a merchant account or shopping cart system, or a number of other reasons. It turns out that while those are important, they aren’t what really stops people from being successful.

What is really the number one reason why so many people fail, according to Bob? Quite simply, it’s:

The failure to ever create their information product.

Ouch! You can’t get to first base unless you pick up the bat and swing.

We’ll be discussing info products Thursday morning on the Blogging and Beyond radio show, www.VoiceAmerica.com, at 8 a.m. PDT/11 a.m. EDT with Paulette Ensign. For info on the show, visit www.BloggingandBeyond.com.

Headlines: Extreme Makeovers From Brian Clark, The Copyblogger Master

By Patsi Krakoff in Writing Great Copy

Daily_times May the Headline Gods bless Brian Clark: he’s undertaken a Herculean task of rewriting headlines for over 100 people who submitted their samples to him.

He calls it March Madness, and I at first thought it would be more like Headline Hell. But wait, no, these sample headlines were actually good to start with.

Master that he is, he’s managed to turn good headlines into great. Here are some samples from the first round:

1. Here’s How You Improved My Blog
Original headline: How My Readers Helped Improve My Blog

2. Passion or the Illusion of Job Security?
Original headline: Non-Existence of Job Security

3. Why the Next Web Will Be Smarter Than You
Original headline: The Web Next Revolution

4. Six Reasons Why You Might Want to Avoid the Tracks GTD Software
Original headline: Digital GTD: A Review of the ‘Tracks’ Software

5. How to Transform Your Boring Bedroom Into a “Boudoir”
Original headline: Transforming Your Space… Can You Say Boudoir?

You can read Brian’s reasoning for making these changes at the Copyblogger blog post here.

Info Products: What You Need to Know to Grow Your Business

By Patsi Krakoff in Teleclasses & Seminars

Blogging and Beyond: Episode 10 Internet Radio Show with The Blog Squad

Thursday March 15, 11 a.m. EDT (8 a.m. PDT)
"Promoting Your Business with Information Products"
with guest expert Paulette Ensign

Audiomicrophone_2 Struggling with how to create more revenue? Providing services is great, but there are only so many hours in a day.  Turn your expertise into information products and watch your income grow.  Transform your knowledge into ebooks, a tips booklet, or other digital format. With low production costs and high profits, you can’t afford not to repackage your expertise so you can reach more customers world-wide. The Blog Squad interviews Paulette Ensign who has sold over a million copies of her tips booklet. In the second half, Ideal Client Erik Feder shares his progress promoting and marketing his online business.

Time: Don’t Forget to Change Your Clocks & Computer

By Patsi Krakoff in How to...Tips

Time Unless you’ve got your computer set to get automatic updates from Microsoft, you may need to change the time settings to agree with Daylight Savings Time which comes three weeks early this year, at midnight Saturday, at the start of March 12.

Fear not. Microsoft provides a free Time Zone Date update program that is easy to use.

Simply go to their site http://support.microsoft.com/gp/cp_dst and follow the simple instructions.

Failure to do so will mean that your calendar and clock functions will be an hour off.

Headlines: More Tips from Clayton Makepeace

By Patsi Krakoff in Writing Great Copy

Daily_times Denise shares these great headline tips over on BizTipsBlog: In a recent newsletter from copywriter Bob Bly, he posted a 7-point checklist for writing stronger headlines..

Clayton Makepeace, arguably the most successful freelance copywriter on the planet, suggests asking these 7 questions about the headline you’ve just written:

1. Does your headline touch a nerve?

2. Does it make a unique claim or statement?

3. Does it provoke curiosity?

4. Is it credible?

5. It is specific?

6. Does it have a news element?

7. Does it offer a compelling benefit for reading?

Source: Clayton Makepeace teleconference, 12/20/06.

A headline can be for a sales letter, a blog post, or an email message.

Related posts:
Recipe for an Ezine: Email Subject Lines

Writing Great Press Releases: Tips from The Hound

By Patsi Krakoff in Teleclasses & Seminars, Writing Great Press Releases

Blogging and Beyond: Episode 9
New Rules for Press Releases
with guest expert Joan Stewart, the Publicity Hound


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During the show we talked a bit about Craigslist and what a great place it is to get free exposure for your company.  But you have to do it right or they will cancel your account.  Check out Joan’s program about Craigslist.

The Secret: There’s More To This Law of Abundance That They Tell You

By Patsi Krakoff in Coaching/Personal Development

Thesecret Visualize it, see it, believe it, live it. There’s a lot of controversy being stirred up by those in the self-help fields about whether the underground video The Secret has merit or is a bunch of New Age hooey touted by self-appointed gurus wanting to sell their programs.

The Secret and its authors have been on Oprah and Larry King Live, so I guess its really not a secret anymore. No matter which side of the argument you take, be sure to read this excellent article about the Law of Abundance and what goes wrong with some people’s attempts to wish riches their way.

Molly Gordon is about a fine a writer around and I’d like to invite you to read her excellent post on her Shaboom blog: What Abundance Gurus Don’t Tell You About the Law of Attraction .

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